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    dots Submission Name: Forgetdots

    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/454
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Struggling for almost a decade to find someone to love and someone to love me has been a listless Hell...I've grown tired and lost for hope...I'm tired of not having anyone by my side...

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    The call of journey,
    Throughout the years of this triumphant misery.
    Walking alone, rifting through the lost crannies,
    I can find the weakness that dwells deep within me.

    When the sun goes down,
    I remain here solaced within the pains unspoken,
    My dreams, for rapids to swallow and drown,
    I don't know how to let anyone else in...

    Now because of it, I fall into a winter thorn,
    Layered with doubt, my disease tumors in turmoils,
    The soles of my shoes frayed and torn,
    Nonreciprocal love that simmers the hate I boil...

    Please save me from the shame I bathe,
    I can not seem to live a life without love...
    Becoming this invisible wraith,
    Hollowing in a life that I just can't take...

    Without love,
    There is no meaning

    Submitted on 2019-06-30 01:21:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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