The general idea I’m getting from this piece is that something or another is being obscured by something else.
Ie. Clouds roll over the stars/crickets chirping swallowed by waves/footprints being blown away
You use nice imagery to get listlessness across. The sense I’m getting is that of despair. As if you’ve lost and or are yearning for a lover or a time of love gone by. Maybe childhood and the sweet memories of family.
Overall, I think you did a good job here. Well done.