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    dots Submission Name: Reveled Nightdots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 368/365/171
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsReveled Nightdots
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    I’ve always reveled in stormy nights
    With the stars on their towers spinning light
    The magnolias sitting on the silver air
    And the Moon twizzling through your hair



    She casts her Banners
    Over our flaring forms
    Being entwined with each other
    Intertwined with the storm

    DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2019-07-09 00:11:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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