This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -

Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Reveled Night

Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368 /366 /172
Words: 52
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 907
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 380


For fun...

Reveled Night

I’ve always reveled in stormy nights
With the stars on their towers spinning light
The magnolias sitting on the silver air
And the Moon twizzling through your hair

She casts her Banners
Over our flaring forms
Being entwined with each other
Intertwined with the storm

DiCicco Cosentino

Submitted on 2019-07-09 00:11:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?