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Reveled Night


Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
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Words: 52
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Reveled Night



I’ve always reveled in stormy nights
With the stars on their towers spinning light
The magnolias sitting on the silver air
And the Moon twizzling through your hair



She casts her Banners
Over our flaring forms
Being entwined with each other
Intertwined with the storm

DiCicco Cosentino




Submitted on 2019-07-09 00:11:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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