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    dots Submission Name: Burieddots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    Bytes: 195



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    dotsBurieddots
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    Dirt between the toes of a skeletal figure
    Shifts with all the steps he could have made
    Feet
    Buried in the remains of ancient soil
    Ache to be touched by loving fingers




    Submitted on 2019-07-09 22:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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