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Submission Name: Still dots

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Author:	rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:	27/m/nyc
Elite Ratio:	6.07 - 368/364/171
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	107
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	258

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A ditty...still trying to get my groove back after not writing almost 2 years

Still

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You’re sleeping so still tonight-
A swan gliding across
the wet black night;
So statuesque,
So silent,
So small
Beside me-
a rosebud
tightly curled within yourself-

©DiCicco Cosentino

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.