Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Still


Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368 /366 /172
Words: 31
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 851
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 265



Description:


A ditty...still trying to get my groove back after not writing almost 2 years


Still



You’re sleeping so still tonight-
A swan gliding across
the wet black night;
So statuesque,
So silent,
So small
Beside me-
a rosebud
tightly curled within yourself-

©DiCicco Cosentino




Submitted on 2019-07-14 00:21:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



202493