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Starry night


Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
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Playing with Shadorma form- syllabic 3/5/3/3/7/5


Starry night


Starry night-
Moonlit, wrapped in light.
Flecks of moon
Shimmering
Upon our glistening skin.
Our lips, pas de deux...

©️DiCicco Cosentino




Submitted on 2019-07-14 10:18:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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