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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/454
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    So think of the times,
    The time spent laughing throughout the day,
    The times,
    And comfort of being alone,
    Without any connections needing repaired.

    Now I find myself doubting love,
    Town to town driving without a care,
    Never fooled from the fiction of faith up above,
    But it seems I'm begging for someone to be there.

    Now I see myself never home,
    With guilt of hurt foreshadowing ones that cared,
    I thought we would both cherish the moments as we aged,
    But life is equally just as unfair.

    Tell the ones beside me I'm alright.
    I finished the chapter of my book tonight.
    Ask the heavens to keep the stars up for me
    I'm free.








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