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    dots Submission Name: Chèvrefeuilledots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368/366/171
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Chèvrefeuille


    There she is:

    legs long as the universe,
    Feet Perched over the
    Arc de Triomphe
    Like two soldiers
    readying themselves for revolution.
    The yoke light of the sun Brisés
    In the fields of her body-
    The fields bloodied for God and country.
    For love in effigies.
    The red poppies cry the names of the fallen.
    They passed the torch to us to raise.
    With a sip of champagne
    She beckons the Honeysuckles
    That nurse the wounded young.

    ©️ DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2019-07-22 01:46:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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