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    dots Submission Name: Moon and Medots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368/366/171
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMoon and Medots
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    Another night- just the moon and me
    My tiny blue vase is perched on my sill like a lark.
    My nightstand is stacked with words seven feet high.
    They collect in the window panes like stars.
    They fall in lines of lyrics and rhymes.
    They’ll rise in lines of rhetoric and revelation.
    I’ll thread them across night like pearls- I’ll wear them
    as a shirt, 3 buttons opened from the top and collar popped.

    @DiCicco Cosentino







    Submitted on 2019-07-24 10:07:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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