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Dreamt


Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
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Words: 37
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Dreamt





I dreamt last night I finally held you-

And all the sadness I’ve carried for so long
Flew like a bird into the endless iridescent
night.


@DiCicco Cosentino




Submitted on 2019-07-24 10:09:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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