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    dots Submission Name: Summer of Peachesdots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.07 - 368/364/171
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 85
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    Description:
       For fun...a quick write about my obsession with peaches this summer.


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    dotsSummer of Peachesdots
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    I.

    There’s an art to picking a peach:

    The spectrum of color
    sunrise to sunset

    Spherical
    Spool of thread

    Weaved filaments
    Yellow/orange/red

    Ripe right before rot
    Syrup soft under the skin



    II.

    Today the sun looks like a peach:
    Yoke yellow around the shoulders
    Red center
    The cat tongue clouds
    Green leaves sprouted at the top

    III.

    I want to peel you with my teeth, gently
    like a peach.

    I want to examine the inside of you: Laminin
    Lysosome and lyrics-

    The longitude of you: arms/eyes/legs/hands/thighs/breasts-

    I want to disrobe you-
    To free you of all restrictions.

    Your skin, soft as summer
    Between my teeth.

    ©️DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2019-07-25 02:38:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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