After a Dream by KeeperOfLight

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Submission Name: After a Dream dots

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Author:	KeeperOfLight
ASL Info:	23, Vancouver BC
Elite Ratio:	2.54 - 41/64/78
Words:	151

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Longing
Total Views:	565
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1085

Description:
A re write of an old poem after a dream

After a Dream dots

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I am here

I am here

right here

not over there

where the cliffs go
down to the
spines
of the deep blue sea

I am here

I am here

right here
beside you

looking over
the world

Listening to the
hooves of steel

clattering the land
for miles.

look right here
right here

not over there
where the cliffs go

down to the spines
of the deep blue sea.

I am here
I am here

right here
right here

beside you

you are beautiful
With your angelic wings

let's fly far
So as not to fall
to the
spines of the
deep blue sea.

I am here

I am here

right here
beside you

not falling
to the spines
of the
deep blue sea

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