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    dots Submission Name: Sleeping Giantdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/331
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 390



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    dotsSleeping Giantdots
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    Subtle is the crescent of unopen eyes
    And the roughness of a gaze cast from up high

    Softly, eyes do tear from the hook
    And are drug to the Heavens to seek asylum
    Merely for comfort, for they cannot look at all

    And this is why there is just a sleeping giant
    Exercised as God
    With all His subjects
    Watching for His wake.




    Submitted on 2019-08-18 22:24:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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