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Author:	homeless
ASL Info:	30
Elite Ratio:	7.01 - 29/19/36
Words:	50

Class/Type:	Prose/Longing
Total Views:	148
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	260

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Don't Tell Me You Love Me dots

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Don’t tell me you love me
I love you but I can’t
Don’t tell me you need me
I need you but I can’t

How do you get by?
Fake it ‘til you make it’
It might work for me
Somehow, I’ll get by

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.