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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.01 - 29/19/36
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 197
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 228



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       September 2017


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    She is the impossible

    A dream cast far
    A distant star

    The ecstatic thrill to me
    The agonizing kill of me

    The beginning
    The end

    She is possible




    Submitted on 2019-08-19 15:31:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      She is the all
    That cannot be
    The everything
    I can’t quite see

    The wisdom
    Just a bit too sly
    An angel
    Whose outgrown the sky

    Just a few thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2019-09-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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