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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.01 - 29/19/36
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 603



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       A Sonnet - July 27, 2017


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    Lost in love when I least expect
    She took my heart, suddenly, with a spark
    Like a match, to kindle, in the dark
    Flames danced upon a course unset

    Like wildfire, we grew ferociously amorous
    Limbs and lips entwined
    To passion's flicker, we resigned
    The sound of her breathing; canorous

    Throwing caution to the wind
    She took a candle to my soul
    To think a touch could make me whole
    To her lips my love is pinned

    A man filled with heart's desire
    Gladly walks amongst a burning fire




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