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Author: homeless
ASL Info:    30
Elite Ratio:    6.98 - 29 /19 /37
Words: 23
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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August 18, 2016


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Love me more
Kiss me more
Sex me more
Suck me more
Everything more
Because I am greedy for you.




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