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    dots Submission Name: I Believeddots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.01 - 29/19/36
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Believeddots
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    I believed

    I believed in love for the first time
    I believed in its strength and power
    I believed we could overcome all obstacles

    I believed you were wrong when you said it wasn't enough
    I believed you were wrong with you said we couldn't succeed
    I believed you didn't believe enough...

    And then you did.
    And I shook...

    I believe I failed you
    I believe I failed myself
    I believe I am failing him

    I still believe in that love...

    Love doesn't believe in me.
    Maybe I don't either.




    Submitted on 2019-08-20 10:37:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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