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    dots Submission Name: Un Lugar Para Siempredots
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    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 303/258/85
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       My attempt at writing a poem, completely in Spanish.


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    dotsUn Lugar Para Siempredots
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    La vida es como una canción
    Pintado bajo la lluvia, el danza, y reggaetón

    Quiero decirle, sin repetirme, que no quiero ir
    De aquí
    Pero la vida tan complicado y igualmente tan libre

    Quiero dormir en tu cama todas las noches
    Y ir a las estrellas en nuestros coches

    Sin levantar y escapar en un lugar que no existe, cuando tenías
    Y cuando habías sido recibido en este mundo

    Donde no hay razón mi corazón para sufrir
    Sin vivir sin ti, sin vivir para morir

    Escucha este horror, imagina la vida sin color
    Por favor, no olvida de los detallas mi amor

    Cada día es una canción diferente, depende de tu mente
    y igualmente la realidad de nunca y siempre

    Pero vamos a pintar juntos el lienzo en blanco
    para cambiar algo que comenzó de la nada y ahora es raro

    Imagina un lugar diferente, en tu mente
    un lugar que no puede olvidarme

    Y ese lugar, no nunca pero siempre voy a estar
    Ahí me puedes visitarme me encontrarás
    Porque ese lugar no es realidad

    Un lugar que está pintado de color,
    Te veré muy pronto, y buenas noches mi amor



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