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    dots Submission Name: Just a fantasydots
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    Author: TiaanK
    ASL Info:    37/M/Dancing in the dark
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 22/27/28
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 140
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    dotsJust a fantasydots
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    Just a fantasy
    Unmistakably
    Erotically
    Frantically
    So close I can taste it
    Too vivid to fake it
    It lingers, it lingers
    On the tips of my fingers
    Wild curls
    Tongue swirls
    Shallow breathing
    A sword unsheathing
    It cuts
    It fucks
    The blooming flower
    Begging to be devoured
    Let’s stop to start
    Those legs apart
    But they don’t
    And we won’t
    Drift away
    Or stay another day
    Whichever way
    Undoubtedly
    Consuming me
    Just a fantasy

    TK-2019




    Submitted on 2019-09-09 03:52:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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