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    dots Submission Name: Post Naturalismdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.27 - 665/486/417
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dotsPost Naturalismdots
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    In the propaganda feed
    All that I ever see
    Are things that I can buy
    And things I can believe

    I do not like it for attention
    I do not add to this distraction
    I am off and on my own
    In the fractions of my home

    What is left of communications?
    Trade it in for dream vacations
    Nullifying oppositions oppose every side
    The natural self starves while the digital self thrives




    Submitted on 2019-09-13 11:45:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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