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    dots Submission Name: burning confusiondots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.27 - 665/487/417
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsburning confusiondots
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    Looking for an escape I open a window
    The building is burning and so am I
    I jump but I land back in my bedroom
    Right through the ground, straight from the sky

    I will never die from this
    It will never eat me alive
    It just weathers me down
    It keeps me on the safe side

    If it spreads will it be real then?
    Something more than an illusion?
    Is the burning all in my head?
    A metaphor for the confusion.




    Submitted on 2019-09-13 11:47:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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