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    dots Submission Name: rimbaudian reveriedots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 369/381/227
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    The lindens are lining the promenade

    how we wish we were seventeen again

    their branches arching ever skyward

    framing Vincent's starry manifold

    swallowing every thought and sound

    each caveat, each dolce far niente

    now fading and then pulsing with the

    rising and ebbing of rhythmic tides

    how serious this business of life is;

    our limbs intertwine as we scramble

    shaking sand from between our toes

    we sit on wicker recliners and imbibe

    beverages that splash down so loudly

    with the crashing of frolicking waves.




    Submitted on 2019-09-16 07:14:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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