They call this part mania

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They call this part mania

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It is always on a night like tonight. Where one minute everything is fine. And then the next minute It is too fine

Submitted on 2019-10-08 02:16:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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And everything was wonderful Until it wasn’t... Just a similar feeling from a different place. I think the simplicity of this hits home with far more intensity than a complex mass of words ever could.

| Posted on 2019-10-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

i like the story in this, how it's a bit like life, too much, too sweet? too much like life.... the good thing is the human in it and behind it like it's a book you want to read or a circumstance you can place yourself in or a moment you want to look into. enjoyed how you brought so much into it in just a few lines.

| Posted on 2019-10-08 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]

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