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    dots Submission Name: They call this part maniadots
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    Author: OneDarkFlame92
    ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 459/424/226
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 35
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    dotsThey call this part maniadots
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    It is always on a night like tonight.

    Where one minute everything is fine.

    And then the next minute


    It is too fine




    Submitted on 2019-10-08 02:16:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And everything was wonderful
    Until it wasn’t...

    Just a similar feeling from a different place. I think the simplicity of this hits home with far more intensity than a complex mass of words ever could.
    | Posted on 2019-10-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the story in this, how it's a bit like life, too much, too sweet? too much like life....

    the good thing is the human in it and behind it like it's a book you want to read or a circumstance you can place yourself in or a moment you want to look into.

    enjoyed how you brought so much into it in just a few lines.
    | Posted on 2019-10-08 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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