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    dots Submission Name: Homedots
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    Author: screams
    Elite Ratio:    5.89 - 447/403/107
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsHomedots
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    Since I've been home
    I can breathe again
    The corners are cleared
    of old demons
    Except the ones I keep as pets

    She welcomes me
    with smiling eyes
    crinkles blue and green
    Each step, a hug
    the roots are nine miles long

    Thought it was cold
    now I'm used to it
    In dark, time
    scream becomes song
    There is rhythm in this pain

    I don't need to
    stop, slow, or go
    The traffic light
    turned its face away
    Patience and Faith, the same thing




    Submitted on 2019-10-26 02:10:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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