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Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75 /194 /254
Words: 136
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Arcing light of morning
captured in your kaleidoscopic
prismatic eyes, resting
on a rusting horizon
it bleeds amber
and indigo dreams, resisting
which retreat, as nights sighs
into sleep –

We smear our hand across dust
in hope
we can feel something
made from everything
that we were;
that was once was
with a swipe –
these particles dance and swirl

Whirl of emotions
maelstrom of commotion
set in motion
the need to embrace one another –
to recall the quips,
stories of yesterday
and every face that smiled
before this time
we revile –

Cherish that voice,
palm their cheek
and wipe that tear –
and remember
to remember…

Swooning light of the candle
captured in a halcyon mind
moments and memories
of everything
better than we thought it could be.

Submitted on 2019-11-02 22:11:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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