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    dots Submission Name: Halcyondots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 75/191/252
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 45
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    dotsHalcyondots
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    Arcing light of morning
    captured in your kaleidoscopic
    prismatic eyes, resting
    on a rusting horizon
    it bleeds amber
    and indigo dreams, resisting
    which retreat, as nights sighs
    into sleep –

    We smear our hand across dust
    in hope
    we can feel something
    made from everything
    that we were;
    that was once was
    with a swipe –
    these particles dance and swirl

    Whirl of emotions
    maelstrom of commotion
    set in motion
    the need to embrace one another –
    to recall the quips,
    stories of yesterday
    and every face that smiled
    before this time
    we revile –

    Cherish that voice,
    palm their cheek
    and wipe that tear –
    and remember
    to remember…

    Swooning light of the candle
    captured in a halcyon mind
    moments and memories
    of everything
    better than we thought it could be.




    Submitted on 2019-11-02 22:11:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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