To the Thirty-two

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To the Thirty-two

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I wish I was strong, composed of the iron in my blood, the stone in my bones and the spirit of my will – but I am not, I am weak; I am man. Was it an illusion? Doubt cast itself onto the floor a spear of light piercing the blue of my eye – insomniac, Death's shadow lives where the aperture captures lies from perspective to mind. Transformation inwards from the Metamorphosis of Kafka to Azathoth am I the dreaming “Blind Idiot God" Lovecraft wrought or am I decay – disgusting failure creature of ill repute? Thirty-two years and I think enlightenment is bullshit –

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And detachment is a fool's excuse to be ignorant.

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