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    dots Submission Name: To the Thirty-twodots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 75/191/252
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsTo the Thirty-twodots
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    I wish I was strong,
    composed of the iron in my blood,
    the stone in my bones
    and the spirit of my will –
    but I am not,
    I am weak;
    I am man.

    Was it an illusion?
    Doubt cast itself onto the floor
    a spear of light
    piercing the blue of my eye –
    insomniac,
    Death's shadow lives
    where the aperture
    captures lies
    from perspective to mind.

    Transformation inwards
    from the Metamorphosis of Kafka
    to Azathoth
    am I the dreaming
    “Blind Idiot God" Lovecraft wrought
    or am I decay –
    disgusting failure
    creature of ill repute?

    Thirty-two years
    and I think
    enlightenment is bullshit –




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