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    dots Submission Name: Psilocybin in October Dance Hallsdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 75/191/252
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPsilocybin in October Dance Hallsdots
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    The ectoplasm of blue light
    possess and pulls
    a latticework of wavelengths
    in sickly polluted stimuli
    beyond the abyss of my eye
    into this world –
    reimagine;
    redefined at lake Parime
    where El Dorado bathed me
    in its golden, mysterious energies
    or so I am to believe.

    Fact or fiction –
    pulled to the other side,
    an other world;
    other beings
    teleported from Nibiru
    into this,
    colliding maelstrom of flesh.
    Hands lick the painted brick
    tasting sensations
    as the music intensifies
    this dispersion of realities
    aspersions which will whisper
    “we're real"

    I return here to Annwn,
    from the mountains of Nysa
    and tell these tales –
    words cusp from thoughts
    to lips;
    to cups, to toast
    in celebration of nonsense
    exhumed from Agartha
    entombed inside
    this need to escape
    trail blaze
    and to look back –
    through the looking-glass




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