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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/392
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 36
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    SUPERNATURAL

    Ft. CORDELL of Eliteskill.com

    You’re so annoying
    boy you be lying
    give you props for trying
    never denying
    yet something attracts me
    gets me
    flaunting
    hopelessly

    I want you but I don’t
    want to touch you, but I won’t
    swallow my pride
    choking down my throat

    I, I, I
    want you all
    but I’m afraid I may fall
    you always pick up when I call
    but it may be a scene from saw
    maybe not at all

    I don’t want to be played again
    I believe that you would make this a sin
    a regret that I will forever hold within
    while I cry your ass will have the biggest grin

    S.H.




    Submitted on 2019-11-07 04:49:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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