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    dots Submission Name: You Dieddots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 21/70/91
    Words: 442
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou Dieddots
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    A piece of me has been decayed
    Recent memories flash again
    In my head the sight of you is infinite
    The way you looked into my eyes
    My soul had finally realised
    The love that we had was always definite

    A little smile for me to keep
    Sowing seeds that I can't reap
    All the while counting sheep
    Please just take me I can't sleep now

    Waiting for the undertow
    Wash me down and let me go
    Eating at my heart and soul
    Here's the thing I never thought I'd come to know

    Something's just not right with me anymore

    Now I
    Know you're not the same
    And honestly neither am I
    There's a deep dark void inside
    My heart
    My mind

    And you
    Struggled through the pain
    And barely, so do I
    Keeping that void inside
    Awake
    Alive
    You died

    You came to me and left your mark
    Carved inside my heavy heart
    A simply perfect memory of you
    The way you fought so hard to breathe
    Your everlasting love for me
    Let me know just what I had to do

    A little smile for me to keep
    Sowing seeds that I can't reap
    All the while counting sheep
    Please just take me I can't sleep now

    Waiting for the undertow
    Wash me down and let me go
    Eating at my heart and soul
    Here's the thing I never thought I'd come to know

    Nothing is ever right with me anymore

    Now I
    Know you're not the same
    And honestly neither am I
    There's a deep dark void inside
    My heart
    My mind

    And you
    Struggled through the pain
    And barely, so do I
    Keeping that void inside
    Awake
    Alive
    You died

    No, I don't know what to do
    I will never get over you
    I tried
    No, I don't know what to do
    I will never get over you
    You died
    No, I don't know what to do
    I will never get over you
    I tried
    No, I don't know what to do
    I will never get over you
    You died
    You died

    Now I
    Know you're not the same
    And honestly neither am I
    There's a deep dark void inside
    My heart
    My mind

    And you
    Struggled through the pain
    And barely, so do I
    Keeping that void inside
    Awake
    Alive
    You died

    Now I
    Know you're not the same
    And honestly neither am I
    Your death has paralyzed
    My heart
    My mind

    And I
    Just can't take this pain
    Your death is keeping my
    Deep dark void inside
    Awake
    Alive
    You died




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