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    dots Submission Name: Canto IIdots
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    Author: Wolfwatching
    ASL Info:    28/Male/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    7.58 - 96/139/123
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsCanto IIdots
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    In his grandmother's house in Killester
    He sinks into the bed, the same scene
    A fascination with old things, dark beads
    Hanging over the reposing statue
    The super-glued head and the pisces robe
    They have their own little histories,
    The virgin is standing amid Christmas's cottages
    And brass bells that gather dust on the mantle piece
    Like him they seem to have left themselves
    In place, tired of it, waiting for the blind to come up.




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