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Submission Name:
Let's force it
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Author:
Wolfwatching
ASL Info:
28/Male/Ireland
Elite Ratio:
7.58 - 96/139/123
Words:
82
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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Description:
Let's force it
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Let's force it this time,
Man looks inward to the circle
At himself
That strange dance
Ducking under upheld arms
Bill and Ben flowerpot men
Let's do the steps even if we're tired
Do it in an empty hall
Looking at each other
This performance
If you look at the back wall
You'll see there are no butterflies.
Less and less people watching
Less reason to go through with it
Let's force it this time
Submitted on 2019-12-29 18:02:08
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