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    dots Submission Name: Let's force itdots
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    Author: Wolfwatching
    ASL Info:    28/Male/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    7.58 - 96/139/123
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 221
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    dotsLet's force itdots
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    Let's force it this time,
    Man looks inward to the circle
    At himself

    That strange dance
    Ducking under upheld arms
    Bill and Ben flowerpot men

    Let's do the steps even if we're tired
    Do it in an empty hall
    Looking at each other

    This performance
    If you look at the back wall
    You'll see there are no butterflies.

    Less and less people watching
    Less reason to go through with it
    Let's force it this time






    Submitted on 2019-12-29 18:02:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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