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    dots Submission Name: Ways to commit suicidedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
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    dotsWays to commit suicidedots
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    Rot in the mountains somewhere by the desert
    Starved and dehydrated by its palid ashy air
    Given your shortcomings, it only might be fair

    Drink a bottle of anti anxiety medication
    I warn you, don't call 911
    They might resuscitate you and when you pass out again
    They'll rape you one by one

    Drink a half gallon of bleach
    But don't let the asphyxiation fool you
    It won't last forever unless you throw it up
    Let the chemicals boil
    And bring your flesh to a crisp
    Unless you want to visit the hospital
    And get prescribed more pills to the list

    The first one seems more agonizing
    Than any immediate death
    But perhaps would be less patronizing
    When everyone sees you're amiss

    Let the vultures circling above you
    Swallow up your bones
    So that you'll have no worries about your corpse
    Being sold to those you loathe




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