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    dots Submission Name: a cypher soar eyesdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 665/487/423
    Words: 433
    Class/Type: Riddle/
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    the worst thing of disease
    is pretending your okay
    all your life is painted for you
    in the slowness of decay
    the aches will never go away
    the cold will always bite you
    if it wasn't for the days you lived
    they might one day invite you
    but you're who you are
    and that's all you have
    as if simple assertion
    wasn't something to halve

    you've got all the chances
    you've got opportunity
    but good luck in finding
    anything new to me

    the worst part
    of losing your mind
    is finding the pieces
    you thought you'd left behind
    because part of you thinks
    this has to be me
    the rest of you sinks
    and we're torn at the seams
    it's not like a dream
    when it's real in the day time
    and nothing compares
    to having no night life
    so what is the point
    in asserting myself
    when half of the pieces
    are still on the shelf
    what if i spill them
    and fall to delerium
    what if the virus
    is stronger than the anti-serum

    what if the nonsense is encrypted in stone
    and every message is a moment at home
    and the little pieces left
    they are good to be alone
    in the silence of a mansion
    posing as a home
    i can change it now in case
    i can take it then by law
    i can open up my mind
    i can learn to code or draw
    if it is real
    i can move again for sure
    is this just a different mirage
    am i at the shore
    what if i'm afraid
    if only for the change
    nothing unassumed
    is a frightened mans dismay
    what if i did it
    what could i do
    there's nothing rhetorical
    there's nothing so few
    there's little to evidence
    there's nothing to do
    waiting is boring
    waiting is lonely
    waiting is empty
    waiting for morning

    i'm okay in living inside a living dream
    i've done it before and i know what it means
    i'm good with a bandage i tend to the wound
    i'm up about 6 out before noon
    i find it hard fitting so i tend to stand out
    i can't really say what i am all about
    i fall short of worthy
    i'm fairly unfortunate
    i can't calculate luck
    if i can't quantify consciousness
    and there's no you now
    it's a part of theirs regardless
    i can't tell if this is real
    but if it is i'll know just what to do
    it takes a little bit of evidence
    to understand the truth




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