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    dots Submission Name: into the next folddots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 665/487/423
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Riddle/Me
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    dotsinto the next folddots

    if i have to pretend
    it might as well be grand
    what a thing to behold
    being clever and bland

    if i'm crazy already
    i might like the ride
    of something less deadly
    stepping inside

    out of a million we are all one
    out of a billion
    divided by sums
    into the world
    wanting wonder and fun
    out of the womb
    wondering what we have done

    it's not that i have forgotten
    there's nothing new to say
    the evidence is thin
    and i do not mean to play
    what if this is helping
    you and so then me
    i do not scratch the itch
    i've justified the means
    i was on the line
    and occasionally i blurred
    into deadly accusations
    over red and yellow words
    so if you know the door
    you can surely find the key
    what you do when you are sure
    is up to your beliefs

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