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    dots Submission Name: a long way homedots
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    Author: cornonthekob
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    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsa long way homedots
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    an instrument is not enough
    to teach you how to play a song
    you've got to practice very much
    the time to learn can be quite long

    there is nothing to let you know
    but that there might be moments of indecision
    wondering if this is worth the time
    wondering if it's something you can live with


    it's too late to throw it a way
    the castle stands tall and strong
    even then there's nothing to say
    you've carried yourself all along


    if it doesn't bleed me dry
    i will turn another page
    sticking needles in my eye
    really isn't quite the way




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