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    dots Submission Name: despite the riskdots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 665/487/423
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsdespite the riskdots

    i want to trust the voices in my head
    they tell me i am well and i am grand
    i want to tell my family instead
    but they do not understand

    two sides to history
    one of them reality
    i'd rather live a fallacy
    than be the smaller man

    i'm guessing that it all adds up
    as long as some one gives enough
    just a simple message, though
    would help me understand

    i'm leaving pieces of myself everywhere
    so i can remember just who i am
    i'm desperate for threads to hold onto
    but i won't consider holding your hand

    it's already over, verdict read out loud
    but i am in the background, muffled by the sound
    waiting for the day i'll be handed the key
    to the door of the future that has a different me

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