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Jilted and Guilty

Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
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Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Jilted and Guilty

Some days I sit back
shut myself in,
read the differences between
those who win –
the heroes, villains
who falter
jilted and guilty –
again and again
and I craft this smile
and see the irony
in such dichotomies
so ever-present
I lament the effervescent
and choose to weep
and be consumed by haunting
thoughts –
that once suited me.

Submitted on 2020-01-19 04:03:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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