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Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75 /194 /254
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /
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and you scream –
in the face of the machine.
Worthless rags wrapped
youthful faces
doused in diethyl rhetoric
evaporated in protest
through colored hair,
standing in the streets –
long letter riots,
choirs of bats and saps.

and you scream –
in the face of the mirror.
Just a tool, simple really
as you’re just fuel to be lit
tossed away by the stronger;
by the smarter –
no quips or memes
change the fact
you'll shatter,
burn and die
on impact.

Submitted on 2020-01-19 04:04:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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