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    dots Submission Name: Molotovdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75/194/254
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 646



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    dotsMolotovdots
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    and you scream –
    meaningless,
    in the face of the machine.
    Worthless rags wrapped
    youthful faces
    doused in diethyl rhetoric
    evaporated in protest
    through colored hair,
    standing in the streets –
    long letter riots,
    choirs of bats and saps.

    and you scream –
    delusional,
    in the face of the mirror.
    Just a tool, simple really
    as you’re just fuel to be lit
    tossed away by the stronger;
    by the smarter –
    no quips or memes
    change the fact
    you'll shatter,
    burn and die
    on impact.




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