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This Hole


Author: TeslaKoyal
Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 21 /70 /91
Words: 300
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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This Hole



Drowning in a sea of destruction
With no way out in sight
Darkness has taken over me
I fear I'll never see the light

I call out to you as I lose my way
I've lost myself again
What I feel is just way too much
Oh how I wish that it would end

Because I sink deeper into this hole
It's a place that I have always known
As time goes on, the deeper I go
With no more faith within
My damaged soul

There's no hope in me to find
My heart is cold and broken
I cannot save the last of me
My truth must stay unspoken

Ashamed I am of how I've been
The grip that's been on me
I am too weak to overcome
Please can you rescue me

Because I sink deeper into this hole
It's a place that I have always known
As time goes on, the deeper I go
With no more faith within
My damaged soul

A part of me just wants to be alone
And a part of me wants to move along
But I am stuck here in this way
Drowning in this loneliness
Fear of living, fear of death
Wishing I was never meant
To live
Oh how I just want to live

Because I sink deeper into this hole
It's a place that I have always known
As time goes on, the deeper I go
With no more faith within
My damaged soul

Will I ever escape this hole
I fear it's all I'll ever know
Time goes on, still deeper I go
With no more faith within
My damaged soul

With no more faith within
My damaged soul

I'll just sink down deeper into this hole




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