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    dots Submission Name: This Holedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 21/70/91
    Words: 300
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThis Holedots
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    Drowning in a sea of destruction
    With no way out in sight
    Darkness has taken over me
    I fear I'll never see the light

    I call out to you as I lose my way
    I've lost myself again
    What I feel is just way too much
    Oh how I wish that it would end

    Because I sink deeper into this hole
    It's a place that I have always known
    As time goes on, the deeper I go
    With no more faith within
    My damaged soul

    There's no hope in me to find
    My heart is cold and broken
    I cannot save the last of me
    My truth must stay unspoken

    Ashamed I am of how I've been
    The grip that's been on me
    I am too weak to overcome
    Please can you rescue me

    Because I sink deeper into this hole
    It's a place that I have always known
    As time goes on, the deeper I go
    With no more faith within
    My damaged soul

    A part of me just wants to be alone
    And a part of me wants to move along
    But I am stuck here in this way
    Drowning in this loneliness
    Fear of living, fear of death
    Wishing I was never meant
    To live
    Oh how I just want to live

    Because I sink deeper into this hole
    It's a place that I have always known
    As time goes on, the deeper I go
    With no more faith within
    My damaged soul

    Will I ever escape this hole
    I fear it's all I'll ever know
    Time goes on, still deeper I go
    With no more faith within
    My damaged soul

    With no more faith within
    My damaged soul

    I'll just sink down deeper into this hole




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