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    dots Submission Name: Delphidots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Delphi


    As I approach the lips
    to kiss the lips of Delphi
    I surrender my soul, my life
    for love, for life forever Delphi.

    A human, a human fault to dream
    I appear before this Queen of Delphi
    no Greek, Persian, Macedonian, a man
    who wills to love a wonder of this world.

    Where the girl next door lives on Main Street
    I bow, I pay homage to this dream, I dare to love
    I dared to kiss one spring day, then a winter’s night
    two bonded by the rings gold, the words of I love you.




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