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    dots Submission Name: Cat and Mousedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 21/70/91
    Words: 341
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCat and Mousedots
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    I scream your name
    You turn away
    My eyes they cry
    Tears for the way
    You use me yet
    Another day
    And make me feel
    I have to stay

    And oh, I know, I couldn't get away
    From all of the things that you would say
    And oh, inside my head, your voice is ringing
    Everything that you were saying
    Rewinding and replaying
    In my head

    As I hold my breath
    You hunt me down
    And you burn this place
    Straight to the ground
    My heart won't stop
    Quickly beating now
    And I just can't take anymore

    All the regrets
    Live deep inside
    This tortured soul
    This burdened mind
    Here in this hole
    Of empty lies
    With silhouettes
    Of broken skies

    And oh, I thought, that you were here to stay
    To help, to heal, to gently guide the way
    And oh, you lied, you had a grip on me
    You used manipulation
    I was just some creation
    In your head

    As I hold my breath
    You hunt me down
    And you burn this place
    Straight to the ground
    My heart won't stop
    Quickly beating now
    And I just can't take anymore

    How could
    You imbed
    All these thoughts
    In my head
    Just hearing
    What you said
    Made me want
    To be dead

    You made me want to die
    Die
    I just wanted to fucking die
    Die
    You made me want to die
    Die
    I just wanted to fucking die...

    As I hold my breath
    You hunt me down
    And you burn this place
    Straight to the ground
    My heart won't stop
    Quickly beating now
    And I just can't take anymore

    Can't hold my breath
    I've been hunted down
    Burning in this place
    While I hit the ground
    My heart has stopped
    Quickly beating now
    Because I just can't take anymore

    I have no more breath
    You hunted me down
    Only ashes left
    On this soiled ground
    My heart is gone
    There's no beating now
    I just couldn't fucking take anymore




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