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    dots Submission Name: Tireddots
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    Author: InYuco Katan
    ASL Info:    22/M/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 43/39/14
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 109
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    Bytes: 484



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    dotsTireddots
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    Tired

    I'm tired
    Lay my head down
    Soft pillow
    Let it all go
    Go to sleep
    The day is over
    You can finally rest
    This is what it feels like to relax
    Time to not think
    Sleep will help everything
    Lay down and calm down
    Go to sleep
    Pain and worry is gone
    Mind is clear
    End of the day and you can unwind
    Suffering is over
    Shut the casket and go to sleep




    Submitted on 2020-02-01 04:27:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Blood sucking can be exhausting, I suppose
    | Posted on 2020-02-02 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]


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