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    dots Submission Name: medicinaldots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.24 - 666/488/434
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmedicinaldots
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    just a hit to take the edge off
    just a month to see it straight
    what if i can get better
    it might not be too late

    what's the point of plain existance
    when it's all you know to do
    what is the value of an essence
    when it's harder to see than assume

    i blend in for moments
    casual greetings and glances
    i know who i would call friends
    and i have no need for things romantic

    so i'm seeking this release
    cuz it works the first few weeks
    enough to clear my head of worry
    and replace the cloud of my disease




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