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    dots Submission Name: Jesus and the New Testamentdots
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    Author: Torie
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsJesus and the New Testamentdots
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    Almost everything we know of Jesus is in the New Testament. And we find -

    Although he was part of the Judaic community based on marriage and children, he never married.

    And he never made love with a woman.

    And he never had children of his own.

    But he did love John, his disciple.

    And he loved other people's children.




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