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    dots Submission Name: better living through poetrydots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.24 - 666/488/434
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsbetter living through poetrydots
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    somethings can be real on the inside
    but then fade into nothing with the day light
    it's not a matter of faulty connections
    it's just the nature of human perception

    you don't have to close your eyes
    you can simply imagine
    something to brighten your day
    or something to kick off the damage

    a damned dilemma to be all out of luck
    so much to give but all out of fucks

    you've got your own oasis
    and a place you can heal
    it can teach you to calm
    or help you learn to feel

    but you can stow it away
    when the lights are on
    supposing you are capable
    willing to and strong




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