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    dots Submission Name: a processdots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.24 - 666/488/434
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsa processdots

    i know not to feed
    the monster in my closet
    karma or ethics
    whatever you choose to call it

    i am not afraid
    of the colors in front of my third eye
    they document my thoughts
    when i am somewhat destitute or feeling high

    i know i'm not the most careful
    i draw sloppily around the lines
    i look for any shimmer of a hope
    looking for a diamond to mine

    most of the time i lose in the light of reflection
    i compare myself to the delusions
    and their facsimile of perfection

    but all i have are second hand copies
    and codes that have to say next to nothing
    still though i have plenty to lose
    even if it isn't the thing that i choose

    maybe it's just pattern recognition
    and an emulation or a mode of thought
    there's more to me than a thought condition
    i have other moods besides empty and distraught

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