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    dots Submission Name: Savior dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44/25/55
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSavior dots


    The flood gates have open
    Emotions overflowing
    Destruction wrecking havoc

    The knowledge of knowing
    You weren't what i thought
    You were never what i knew

    Now the gates are broken
    And its all because of you

    I let you break them
    You walked right on in
    Something inside of me
    Broke deep within

    Frustrated As i ,
    find these words to speak the turbulence
    Brewing from below
    On the surface showing
    Is only what you know

    Fire spewing from
    The damage to those gates delt

    Wide open, vulnerable as i find myself
    I was never what you thought you knew
    Im much to deep for a shallow one such as you

    Purity as this purge from the gates find me
    I am more then you know , more then what i allow you to see

    I will not succumb to the ignition
    Your destructive behavior
    Because , i am , my only savior

    Submitted on 2020-02-15 01:30:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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