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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44/25/55
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Numb @katherineMRome
    New poem as of feb 14th 2020
    " protected"

    I hate you , beyond all meaning
    You can never change this feeling

    Your sorrow, all of your mistakes , i am not the one to blame

    You've numbed me to the core , you've taken all that was good away

    You are poison, a toxin to my very soul , i curse the times , that i forgave , thinking that one day , you'd change your ways

    I was stupid for believing in the good with the bad , wishing so desperately for things ive never had

    You put on show and made me the fool , i am not a puppet on a string , you are done controlling me

    Ive broken our bonds , ill set the remainders on fire, for me , there is no more desire

    I despise you with every breath, there's nothing left in me but rage , you asked for forgiveness but youll never change

    Those rose colored glasses blinded me so well , indulged on your wicked spell

    The fool i became and numb i shall remain




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